i'll play along, only cause i'm bored at work... and your verses are horrible.
if you want beef, then i'll give you a herd, straight young white angus with no guitar, nerd, keep my shit real simple with taste but no herbs, keep your sesame seed nonsense, that shit is for birds, i've seen you on the strut talking shit, busted lip, swollen eye, going why oh why did i get hit? you probably pop shit to the wrong 8th grade chick, stole on yu quick, played yu out for a vic, here's your rap summary,save that shit its buggin me, until you learn to rhyme you really get no love from me, i'm otto comma king, born in the county of king, concieved in the rain so to me its no thing, you say you have mad hoes? i'll take that bait, mad meaning pissed off after just one date, now i expect one to the nose, since you think you're fly, at 5"8' you might could probably swing that high, but you better bring a lunch, and a plan, and your man, and something with some kick, cause your raps ain't shit.
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if you want beef, then i'll give you a herd,
straight young white angus with no guitar, nerd,
keep my shit real simple with taste but no herbs,
keep your sesame seed nonsense, that shit is for birds,
i've seen you on the strut talking shit, busted lip,
swollen eye, going why oh why did i get hit?
you probably pop shit to the wrong 8th grade chick,
stole on yu quick, played yu out for a vic,
here's your rap summary,save that shit its buggin me,
until you learn to rhyme you really get no love from me,
i'm otto comma king, born in the county of king,
concieved in the rain so to me its no thing,
you say you have mad hoes? i'll take that bait,
mad meaning pissed off after just one date,
now i expect one to the nose, since you think you're fly,
at 5"8' you might could probably swing that high,
but you better bring a lunch, and a plan, and your man,
and something with some kick, cause your raps ain't shit.
You have great spirit
Don't let anyone tell you otherwise - your poems have instant appeal
Otto's was a tad slicker though.
And a trademark drive-by hit and run heckle from usual suspect FR too
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